tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post3236596178119930194..comments2024-03-27T22:26:44.037+05:30Comments on RENDEZVOUS: SEPOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18165767356704947895noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-32553529222010171622010-01-06T23:44:19.617+05:302010-01-06T23:44:19.617+05:30Thats...captivating. And...I think you should put ...Thats...captivating. And...I think you should put up some stuff like naming the park, the book she was reading etc. You can also pen down Tiara's facial expressions, they'll help the reader to connect better and since the protagonist (Tiara) is more of a person who loves solace and doesn't speak much, it would be good if you present her mind in words.Dhruv. .http://dhruvbhatiasjournal.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-7242192313558582202009-12-30T21:52:44.072+05:302009-12-30T21:52:44.072+05:30steamy....!!
grt effort..i would say!!...though at...steamy....!!<br />grt effort..i would say!!...though at some places emotions are over-flowing...plus the core character could have been christened some other way..it feels like its being written exclusively for english!!.....but i surely wanted to read more of it..keep up d work..all izzz well!! Sahil mengi.Sahil menginoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-22753045445731445852009-12-29T20:27:51.450+05:302009-12-29T20:27:51.450+05:30:):)snehanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-48844878961247552782009-12-29T20:07:38.858+05:302009-12-29T20:07:38.858+05:30gud to hear that...
if u can take criticism this w...gud to hear that...<br />if u can take criticism this way u'll surely do gr8 things!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-77476397187732858302009-12-29T14:04:34.067+05:302009-12-29T14:04:34.067+05:30@anonymous
thanks a lot for your comment.it really...@anonymous<br />thanks a lot for your comment.it really is of a great importance and value to me. i will surely follow ur advice..!! tcsnehanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-79457880894133078832009-12-29T13:58:12.388+05:302009-12-29T13:58:12.388+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.SEPOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18165767356704947895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-89448909887866188462009-12-29T01:40:15.696+05:302009-12-29T01:40:15.696+05:30see first the fixation wid foreign locales and nam...see first the fixation wid foreign locales and names is not right. choose places where u hav been to so that u can use the surroundings and culture etc. it may not be true that parents stop girls from studying in other culture cos that may only be a pan asian phenomenon..<br />secondly describe the characters physical attributes more vividly so that one can imagine wat the character looks like....<br />read some authors who do this effortlesslyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-38689311127417710252009-12-26T13:25:13.168+05:302009-12-26T13:25:13.168+05:30it is really cool..i mst sy d vocab is bang on..d ...it is really cool..i mst sy d vocab is bang on..d use of words is beautiful..i m eagerly waiting 4 more.du write it fast..nd sepo gr8 work so far..really it is lukin lik some proffesional work..keep it up buddy m ur first fan.ćőmmừńíőńhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12598312290308924903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5083122817368521892.post-63674221545837175752009-12-21T09:45:48.416+05:302009-12-21T09:45:48.416+05:30fab!!
to be very honest,,,i'm feeling jealous ...fab!!<br />to be very honest,,,i'm feeling jealous of u as u started ur book b4 mine but it is really awesome!!vandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01543528970658528085noreply@blogger.com